What do you guys thuink about this idea?
I have just recorded it. Is it any good?
It's supposed to have proper lyrics, of course.
let me know what you think.
I'll keep it up for a couple of days.



Thanks!

Man, three thumbs up!
Everything in it is beautiful. If you're going to improve the lyrics and make it a little longer, you'll go beyond perfection, to my mind. When it is complete, please post it, I want to listen to it, put it in my playlist and download it. If it'll have a different name, please let me know, so that I can look it up. And you should put it in the battle. You'll get a hundred from me, I promise!

Very nice tune....
A bit work to the chorus esp. the vocal line, imo bit too high.
Did you think about another instrumentation to make it more ... hmmm ... popular? Just a thought

So this is what came in my mind while listening....
a romatic night with a lovely girl, candles... yep... (wake me up when its over) maybe other people feel the same

All in all a great idea. And... PLEASE.... go on with it

btw forget about lyrics.. it doesnt matter which words you are going to sing, but HOW!!!

I actually like the way the chorus sounds. I don't feel that it's too high, but I am not saying you're not right.
The way I see the song is that the first part is played on an acoustic guitar or piano (or both) plus vocals, and when the first chorus starts there come in more instruments. The second verse should be fully instrumented. What do you think? Oh, and some powerful fat drums.

Hey, Triton - fancy giving it a go?
I know you'd make this sounds even better!
Let me know, please

Andirux - thank you for saying what you've said - I am very happy it is to your liking!! I'll let you know when it is finished.

Awesome JBP, this is a very pleasing piece of work. I really like it.
I agree with TK, it is ideally suited for a romantic night with candles. Thank you for the feeling.

Top rating!

best whishes
bubu

wow jim this sounds so active .................. is this the new mike???

very close miking ............... or at least it sounds that way???

nice ideas forming here as ever.............

lol

john

the fish

so very very moving..smooth and feeling in all the right areas.xxx

Thanks BUBU, SWORDY, PAGANs!!
I have to do this one from a to z, then.
Anybody wanna join in?

HHHA... you want me to?

first step: downloading.... done
second step: cutting
third step: bringing in my ideas and sounds
4th: send it to you
5th:

u recorded this at what beat per minute??? ..........? or loose
plus what key???..... u using a capo??

john

John, I use a capo on the 5th fret, I guess. The tune must be in F or F#, but when I use the capo I play it in C. Hope this helps. I quess the rate is about 75 bpm.

C, Waiting fot things to happen

You know guys, that I love working with you!

Love the sound.

I could imagine only adding some muted saxophone to the mix...I think that would be awesome...oh and of course adding some minutes to its length.

Sounds like a great start!

-Mark

Excellent!  Beautiful guitar, lovely sound and the vocals sound sweet to my ears...  Good show, I'm diggin it all...

Hen Hao!