A bit of a step back since I bought a new electric with DS-1, went back to acoustic despite wanting to launch a full on recording project again. But hey its a good way to write songs.

Rough recording (some timing fucked up like in the first verse) of this song, that is generally dedicated to my girlfriend minus the "emo"'ish choruses, which are just i dunno what to call it, imagination.

Feel free to critique the hell out of it.

I like it a lot. Vocals are great and guitar is nice and constant. I like the little part 1:30 in it.

nice  idea
can u add to this???
drum trak maybe?
harder singing???
fish

Agree with Swordfish... You got a nice song here that could really pack a punch just by taking the vox up a notch or two....

I like the ideas here progression melody is nice only suggestion 
close mic that creamy voice of yours use a pop shield sing across of the mic might bring the vox into the mix some more , very cool tune Dj   

u need buy better microphone to record that kind of stuff. pretty nice idea anyway