A new song i wrote one day

Hi Pat....Ima sucker for acoustics...I think you need to kinda deepen the Guitar sound....make it have a deeper bass sound to it...seems l,ike there is to much treble in the mix...

I like the song...your coming along pretty good...much improvement in your work as you progress..

Flyer

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Keep at it man its coming along.Never heard you sing before,I think you should keep at it..Some mix and recording things need to be sorted out as Flyer mentions,but keep at it your getting there!