| Outbound [remix V1] |    |
At 6 mins I cocked-up the rhythm guitar, but just left it, ad-libing thereafter....
Not sure what to do with it? so please give me your thoughts.
My current thoughts are to add some vox here and there, editing or lowering the lead guitar in the mix and after 6 mins add some spacey synth work, or simply end it at 6mins
Cheers
Denis
Not sure what to do with it? so please give me your thoughts.
My current thoughts are to add some vox here and there, editing or lowering the lead guitar in the mix and after 6 mins add some spacey synth work, or simply end it at 6mins
Cheers
Denis
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nice intro measure! The piece sounds quit complete as it is. If you are going to expand it with synths, you should in my opinion prepare that section by briefly using the synths in this section. Double some firts count beats guitar chords/notes with a synth chord/notes. A tip would be to makes the preparing notes harmonicaly logical eventhough the might be stretched apart. This will give a great effect when the synths come in the end. I'm just babbling away. Maybe i will help you a bit. I like what you have so far!
| re: Outbound [remix V1] |
clean studio sound
at start......................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
1:32
i give up
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
get my message???
great song but no vocal............
its got 2 be in your head just to organise this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
love and happiness
haha
luv ya
the fish
at start......................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
1:32
i give up
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
get my message???
great song but no vocal............
its got 2 be in your head just to organise this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
love and happiness
haha
luv ya
the fish
Jupiler wrote…
nice intro measure! The piece sounds quit complete as it is. If you are going to expand it with synths, you should in my opinion prepare that section by briefly using the synths in this section. Double some firts count beats guitar chords/notes with a synth chord/notes. A tip would be to makes the preparing notes harmonicaly logical eventhough the might be stretched apart. This will give a great effect when the synths come in the end. I'm just babbling away. Maybe i will help you a bit. I like what you have so far!
Not clear on where you are suggesting to put the synths?
Double first count beats??
A tip would be to makes the preparing notes harmonicaly logical eventhough??
| re: re: Outbound [remix V1] |
swordfish wrote…
clean studio sound
at start......................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
1:32
i give up
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
where is vocal...................
get my message???
great song but no vocal............
its got 2 be in your head just to organise this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
love and happiness
haha
luv ya
the fish
Ok mate, I'll try and get it my head, even though it's just full of pure oxygen at the moment.
Cheers me ol' mucka
Denis
Wow Denis this is awesome!!The production is great and the balance of all instruments sound very well placed...The only thing I would drop would be the big crash levels just a bit...I also hear as the song progresses a bit of guitar crackling or clipping not sure where its coming from or what it is...Great show ,that oxygen in your head must have been real good quality!
Marino wrote…
Wow Denis this is awesome!!The production is great and the balance of all instruments sound very well placed...The only thing I would drop would be the big crash levels just a bit...I also hear as the song progresses a bit of guitar crackling or clipping not sure where its coming from or what it is...Great show ,that oxygen in your head must have been real good quality!
Your ears are amazing M, the crackling is where the gate is on the ballance of cutting, at least that's what I think it is, could be Mp3?? it sounds great on my car and home Hi-fi on a wav file, I think it's the best quality recording I've done to date. Initally I too thought the crash levels were too high, I suppose I''ve got used to it, I think your right to reduce the levels of the crash cymbol.
Cheers
Denis
Hey, Dennis! Very good one. I really did like it very much. Apart from what was pointed out by the guys, I really find nothing to change on it. From my personal perspective, it's good as a it is. The crackling are subtle and although a song with lyrics would be good, this one sounds to me like it's made to be like this. Great work again! Rating it high
| What to do now |
Thanks for the feedback so far everybody: This is what I think I should do now:
1. After the intro into sing outbound in double or triple Harmony in unison of the two chords, that way I can keep the lead that is there and it wont conflict.
2. Drop the crash cymbal's a few db's. Would prefer real drums [my friend who has an electronic kit is very busy at the moment, hope he gets time to put drums on some of my songs soon, that would be awesome]
3. Add synths here and there, if it sounds OK will extend it after 6 Min's, otherwise the piece is too long, I wouldn't want the listener to get bored. I'm not equipped to do this at the moment, I'm hoping to get a new PC soon, hence my motherboard on my current PC is crap, all my current recordings are done on a workstation which obviously does not support midi, or will collab with somebody.
Any other ideas or thoughts on these suggestions would be appreciated.
Cheers
Denis
1. After the intro into sing outbound in double or triple Harmony in unison of the two chords, that way I can keep the lead that is there and it wont conflict.
2. Drop the crash cymbal's a few db's. Would prefer real drums [my friend who has an electronic kit is very busy at the moment, hope he gets time to put drums on some of my songs soon, that would be awesome]
3. Add synths here and there, if it sounds OK will extend it after 6 Min's, otherwise the piece is too long, I wouldn't want the listener to get bored. I'm not equipped to do this at the moment, I'm hoping to get a new PC soon, hence my motherboard on my current PC is crap, all my current recordings are done on a workstation which obviously does not support midi, or will collab with somebody.
Any other ideas or thoughts on these suggestions would be appreciated.
Cheers
Denis
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Denis..I think Fish wants to hear some Vocals...what do you think?.. 
..another great track and a real good recording..this has a nice flow to it...It reminds me a bit of the Rocky Theme( just a very small tad)...But at a slower tempo..Nice work Denis..
Flyer
Rates high
..another great track and a real good recording..this has a nice flow to it...It reminds me a bit of the Rocky Theme( just a very small tad)...But at a slower tempo..Nice work Denis..Flyer
Rates high
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