Little song I wrote...Would love to get some feedback

Lyrics:
Here we are
Same place again
Here we are
Trying to make amends
Did you think it would last
Or destruct this way?
If so why did you
Carry on anyway?

You let me go
I walked away
You let me go
I walked away

You knew the path to my heart
Was a lonely road
Maybe that's why
It wasn't so hard to let go
Let go of our past
And our history
Let go of you
Letting go of me

You let me go
I walked away
You let me go
I walked away

Somehow I knew it wouldn't last
Figured it was just some kind of fate
Just know it wasn't your fault
Couldn't blame you not to stay
Go on do something else
Go ahead and live some other way
Just don't turn round and see me here
We'll be better off this way

You let me go
I walked away
You let me go
We'll be better of this way
You let me go
I walked away
You let me go
We'll be better of this way

You wouldn't happen to be a green day fan would you?
:/

Right. Here is my feedback. Don't echo/reverb everything or do it the entire time. It hurts my brain.

Later.

Maybe I'm missing something...Why do you ask if I'm a green day fan? lol  I don't really listen to them to be honest...

I give lessons, so I have to listen to alot of green day. The strumming pattern and the vocal stylings are very similar between yourself and gd