I had to reload this one. Some fool spammed my page that this song was on before. JimK Deleted the thread and all the comments and the song were deleted.

This is a Collaboration

Blueyes/ Lyrics/Vocals/Piano
Flyer/ Lyrics/Backing Vocals...Harmony

well, to be honest, the song is really really good. I do have some criticism, however. First of all, I would rather hear one person sing this tune - two vocals make it chaotic. Secondly, if you wanna keep the two voices, they need to be in sync. They MUST be but they seem not to at some places. Oh, how I'd love to hear you harmonise. Unisono may be dull in the long run - can you try and venture further as far as the second vocals are concerned? This would be great. At this stage it sounds as if one of you were unsure of he is singing, and there is some hesitation in the air. On a positive note, the lyrics are really cool, and the composition is excellent. Thanks guys for posting (I heard it before but had no time to post a crit)
Will vote

the songwriting is fine.............
but the delivery isn't......
Question is this one of your early songs???
I go with jbp here
nope this aint good fer me
the voice is in mush ...... u know where i'm comin from here???
treat as work in progress please ............ it needs clearing up ...........
foggy foggy sound
needs more than a staggering jo anna (piano) as it falls out of time frequently

fish

I remember this!!!
Flyer you are one awesome songwriter.I do miss Blue,I wish he came around more often.Anyway as usual areal good song from you.Some minor editing and hiss issues but nice track!!!

Good job Flyer!

Thanks for the comments everyone..I agree...this needs a lot of work done to it....

Flyer