#1August 18th, 2007 · 01:15 AM
50 threads / 12 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Here with you

This song is not in a battle

I'm with you tonight
Here I can hold you tight
First tree to drop a leaf
Well I know I can hold this greif inside

Truth doesn't just go away
It stays here with you and me

No one is saying it
'Cause we are all faking it inside

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#2August 18th, 2007 · 09:22 AM
17 threads / 3 songs
185 posts
United States of America
cool song
Your getting a very  good guitar  sound.  It's sounds as good as pro recording stuff very blended and smooth.
 I like your voice in this too.. just kinda easin  on in there .    imho I think this works well just like it is.  not much to add to it  or criticize  ...cause I liked it a lot.
#3August 18th, 2007 · 12:36 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,371 posts
United Kingdom
The recording quality is much better than the other songs you have just uploaded, You're playing guitar much softer in this song, much better sound!!

Will rate.

#4August 18th, 2007 · 12:39 PM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
Love the tone of the guitar.  You need a pop filter.  They cost too much, so stretch pantyhose over a wire hanger.  It works perfectly.

You still don't sing confidently.  Try to put more into your voice.
#5August 18th, 2007 · 06:22 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Record the guitar and then listen to it over and over talking , feeling , singing as you walk like an inspired mad man in circles around the sound filled room!
I mean get to know the song , what it says and where.
I don't think you need so much 'confidence', that you have, you've sung a damned good song, I think you need to separate the words from the music, once their right bring them back together again.
I think your guitar playing is lovely and has come out very crisp, as is the vocal.
Yes a pop filter.
#6August 20th, 2007 · 09:28 PM
7 threads / 5 songs
52 posts
United States of America
keep it up man
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