I'm with you tonight
Here I can hold you tight
First tree to drop a leaf
Well I know I can hold this greif inside

Truth doesn't just go away
It stays here with you and me

No one is saying it
'Cause we are all faking it inside

Your getting a very  good guitar  sound.  It's sounds as good as pro recording stuff very blended and smooth.
 I like your voice in this too.. just kinda easin  on in there .    imho I think this works well just like it is.  not much to add to it  or criticize  ...cause I liked it a lot.

The recording quality is much better than the other songs you have just uploaded, You're playing guitar much softer in this song, much better sound!!

Will rate.

Denis

Love the tone of the guitar.  You need a pop filter.  They cost too much, so stretch pantyhose over a wire hanger.  It works perfectly.

You still don't sing confidently.  Try to put more into your voice.

Record the guitar and then listen to it over and over talking , feeling , singing as you walk like an inspired mad man in circles around the sound filled room!
I mean get to know the song , what it says and where.
I don't think you need so much 'confidence', that you have, you've sung a damned good song, I think you need to separate the words from the music, once their right bring them back together again.
I think your guitar playing is lovely and has come out very crisp, as is the vocal.
Yes a pop filter.

keep it up man