one of my happier songs..    Please COMMENT!

Nice intro..sounds like a pretty good recording so far...clean... very nice voice..it comes in so nice at the 1:45 mark or so....I like the chord structure...simple but good

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Thanks. 

I like your feel and uniqueness. I'm constantly criticized for not completing my songs and I feel you have to do the same with this. Your asset is your voice. it is too low in this mix. Personally I would only have a little echo in the lead guitar.

ah - playing with that delay pedal is SO MUCH FUN isn't it?!     This is a great start to a song..but I think it needs to be developed more...maybe write some lyrics...shorten the intro...and I'm pleased that your recording quality is getting better everyday! good job 

Cool idea in the intro I hear the intent. Clean it out and define it at it should be be great.love your voice is growing nicely and so is your recording quality.Yep I'll one day say I know KINE met her in teens.She's a great musician right...
Keep them coming Kine you Rule

Nice......however the delay does get quite annoying and distracting when the strummed chords come in....I have to listen again..some one was at the door..I missed it, so I think its too short as well!


*edit* Very nice vox melody..I would build around it, also I could see you on stage performing this with Pink Floyd..never stop creating Kine!

thanks.