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Well, It's a little (just alittle) out of tune, and quite noodleistic in the beginning..
But it's too short.. I was just getting into it, really relaxing with it.. some greta ideas in here...
I suggest expanding on this.. make it longer but not larger, don't ruin it by adding a bunch of crap, the twoo part guitar diddy works for this well... I also suggest keeping it instrumental, although a two word, almost spoken vocal would do wonders for it.. Don't go overboard with the vocals.... Anyway, I really really like this...
Please continue this!
JimK
But it's too short.. I was just getting into it, really relaxing with it.. some greta ideas in here...
I suggest expanding on this.. make it longer but not larger, don't ruin it by adding a bunch of crap, the twoo part guitar diddy works for this well... I also suggest keeping it instrumental, although a two word, almost spoken vocal would do wonders for it.. Don't go overboard with the vocals.... Anyway, I really really like this...
Please continue this!

JimK
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