#1February 18th, 2007 · 09:49 PM
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Improv. #09
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An Improvisation I found the other day on a DVD back-up.

Basically two guitar parts. Thought I'd share it!

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#2February 18th, 2007 · 10:27 PM
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hmmmm
Well, It's a little (just alittle) out of tune, and quite noodleistic in the beginning..

  But it's too short..  I was just getting into it, really relaxing with it.. some greta ideas in here...

 I suggest expanding on this.. make it longer but not larger, don't ruin it by adding a bunch of crap, the twoo part guitar diddy works for this well...  I also suggest keeping it instrumental, although a two word, almost spoken vocal would do wonders for it..  Don't go overboard with the vocals.... Anyway, I really really like this... 

         Please continue this! 

                   JimK
#3February 19th, 2007 · 03:34 AM
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Great start
You definitely have a good foundation here. Obviously, improv. won't sound the greatest, but that's where some of the best ideas can come from. I like the "break-down" feel around 42-45 seconds. I love to hear you turn this into a full-blown song.
#4February 19th, 2007 · 06:08 AM
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Me too I like this very much, is very soothing Try and  make it longer by adding a sort of bridge or something..Plan your lead melody a bit to clean it up and should end up with a beautiful piece.
#5February 19th, 2007 · 07:24 AM
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With that encouragement I think I may just get the geetar out tomorrow and work it out and make a structure for it :O.
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