Hello there . This is a new song of mine, and again, not finished.. sorry.
It first starts with an atmospheric sound, and then turns into something different... well just listen .
Any ideas on how to continue are very welcome, and so are other comments of course.

Greetz

RazoR

not bad Steven..I like the mellow flow to the right in your face kick around 1:05...like the music...lol  cool lyrics..well this deff needs to be completed
I really dont know what to say about what direction you should take this... Im sure your talent will shine on this...you'll figure it out ...but so far as to what you have is good I think

Flyer

well..........I think you should abruptly end the melody(around 1:37)  as you start to scream I'm starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrvvvvvvvvvvvviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggg..Then its in your face power guitar accompanied by the melody that abruptly ended.......Im feeling aggressive today

Well it's definitely RazoR style!

It's a very good start.

If I listen very carefully I hear a very high tonal clicking a bit like water, don't know if it's intentional.

Will we get to hear this when it's finished?

Cool song!  I think the drums could be a bit louder when they kick in, and that bass drum sounds too sharp for the mood of the song.  Other than that, this would have a high rating from me if you ever finish it

btw are you playing that piano or is it a VST (or both)?

good to hear your vocal style has become more powerful... as commented on the track you did with DOE - in this song too, I think your starting to sound more and more like VNV nation. Not a bad thing, but I doubt that you would want to sound like a band that already exists. not that you're done evolving, comparing this to your earlier tracks, I can only imagine what you would sound like in a year, or two...

keep it up!

Thanx all of you . Yeah you will surely get to hear it when it's finished.

I'm thinking of adding some heavy guitars yes. The piano is played on my midi keyboard, using Reason.

To puppetxeno.. about VNV nation.. well, I listened to them lately.. some songs sounds a bit like mine... but they concentrate more on trance sounds I think...

well. thanks for all the replies, I'll start working on it

Greetz

Yes, it's a very good tune, unfinished...needs a chorus maybe?
I'd personally start singing earlier as the intro gets a bit long

Dude, you have something really good here!
just continue the idea of the song you begun here, and you will get something really good!
That intro was cool! Loved it!
So work on it, cause you can make a great song out of this.
 
         > Iszil

gr8 song u produced there really liked it and to all of u, ths guy is a gem he produces such cool songs tht u wanna listen more n more...........but he jus likes to tease by jus posting thm incomplete.....like girls do, show a little hide a little ........

yipppeeee...........

this is awesomeness! Quick, i wanna hear the complete thing!

Verrry nice.

I hit play and started surfing around... Then I sort of forgot what I was doing... Started wondering where the hell is that music coming from? Surely not bandamp...

Needs to be finished! Then you have my vote.

I like the buildup here, cool feel to the song.  The piano is cool too.  I would like to see it build up even more and get heavy!