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This is version1 of many and many more yet to come I'm sure. I don't like the vocals on this. Only 2 of us recordeding, he did drums and bass and I did everything else. Will re-record this one with a bridge and the vocal stylings of the version2 I did with spoon. Will try to find that and post it too! =)
heh... funky...
ultrafunky...
imo? vox are awesome. really fit with the song... and that's a big thang.
mix is a bit raw. eh...
mmm... I think you made this one for my playlist
the taka vote 'very good' too...
ultrafunky...
imo? vox are awesome. really fit with the song... and that's a big thang.
mix is a bit raw. eh...
mmm... I think you made this one for my playlist

the taka vote 'very good' too...
me to very good |
love the way this starts man its right in your face and going. couple levels but that a easy fix. like the song like the vox. Who did the bass and gtrs? good job
This is pretty funky. Bass is cool. Needs some funky-in-your-face lead guitar though, and maybe the drums could be switchin' it up more. I like the words - fun. I don't really like your vocals on this one, I think you sing better on the sweet ballad songs, or the jazz ones. You sound like you are plugging your nose or something, but maybe that's the effect you were trying for? The other thing is that I think it is too repetitive...it needs a busty bass break-out bridge, or some different chords, a change of some sort.
Funk-ee
I like it...... It is pretty cool....
I agree the mix is pretty raw, but that also works in it's favor a bit...
And yea, could use some funky hot ripppin lead guitar in there.. something that says FRUIT RULES MAN! you know?
It is especially good on waffles......
Jim K
I like it...... It is pretty cool....
I agree the mix is pretty raw, but that also works in it's favor a bit...
And yea, could use some funky hot ripppin lead guitar in there.. something that says FRUIT RULES MAN! you know?
It is especially good on waffles......
Jim K
wow, kindof weird tune here.. but very nice, real funky.
Me I like lots of fruits too! esp. oranges...
it's pretty much unfinished though, that seems obvious...
so I await your other version
excuse me while I'm havin at the beer tree
Me I like lots of fruits too! esp. oranges...
it's pretty much unfinished though, that seems obvious...
so I await your other version

excuse me while I'm havin at the beer tree

Really fabulous drums in this one, well recorded too.
The timing of the guitar is a little "sloppy" in places - (believe me, I know how to do that really well!) - but it's not so bad that it spoils the feel of this.
Vocals need work in finding a vocal line that you're happy with..... it's sung well (I do like the sound of your voice), but it sounds as if you weren't really sure how to sing it!
It's a quirky piece, but somehow I like it.
Finish it - it'll be great I'm sure.

The timing of the guitar is a little "sloppy" in places - (believe me, I know how to do that really well!) - but it's not so bad that it spoils the feel of this.
Vocals need work in finding a vocal line that you're happy with..... it's sung well (I do like the sound of your voice), but it sounds as if you weren't really sure how to sing it!
It's a quirky piece, but somehow I like it.
Finish it - it'll be great I'm sure.

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