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My first proper full-length (more in structure than time) song that has been recorded with at least some care.

I hope you like it; the lyrics are more a placeholder to ensure the melody fits than anything else. Has a solo which I'm quite proud of, too.

I like this. Nice melody. The vocals sound nice and clean. so... yea. It sounds a little like it's missing something where the guitar solo comes in. maybe some drums?
Cool song
- Ben

your voice is really good, i like the way you use it aswell.

Maybe take your recordings a little more seriously although i do like the lyrics and the chorus just hits you so nicely especially the backing vocals at the end. Good melody too. Guitar was very good but i feel you put a lot more effort into the guitars at the beginnning than you did after the solo hit, you had a fairly good layered intro with nice guitar parts but then after the solo it was just the same strumming.

But i like it, if this is your most properly structured song then thats not very cool.... all i can say is put more effort in because this sounds good.

I have to say that the title is pretty offensive, as is the overall lyrics... but the music is pretty good...

    I like the sound of the guitar solo... but change the lyrics...  that's just tasteless...

                 And I wrote Flatulence Odair, and Techno Erotica..

                                   Jim K

yes.. the lyrics are very offensive. and I wrote Acid Son... and Nightflyer...

but it's a nice construction, very summerish, light and bright, nothing too serious. nice sound to that guitar... ok then.

cheers.

vocal and back-vocals are really succsessful

I like the lyrics cause I used to go to a club for under 18s. It was called indie. and there was always fat birds in bikinis and tight skirts. It pretty much ruined the night.
I know that's kinda shallow but it just wasn't nice. If your fat, don't flaunt it.
Anyway, not sure whether that's what these lyrics meant but I found them amusing for that reason. Cool tune. WI have to agree with chill though. The guitar just gets samey after a while.
KI

Forgive me if I'm wrong, but it sounds like all the tracks are still separate. Too much sibilance (the s's hiss too much)-those are very high-frequency, so you could lower the 12k and above EQ levels (on a 31-band EQ). The vocals are fine.

What about "Ugly girls trying to look sexy?"

Why? Becuase ALL women think they're fat, believe me-you don't want this in your resume during an argument. Because, you know, you will be confronted with the inevitable, "Do I look fat in this?" at some point.

People don't KNOW they're ugly, though. What they should do is just not make certain clothing in certain sizes. They shouldn't sell Speedos to Michael Douglas either, but someone did.

I do like the sound of this.  Your vocals and harmonies are great.  It reminds me of a Barenaked Ladies song.  As for being offensive...i dunno...you'd have to ask a fat girl what she thought, that is, if you care at all.  I'm guessing you don't 

nice harmonizing...nice song... hope you dont get to many hits on the head from ladie pocket books....cuz of the title and lyrics

ralph