I wrote this for a song writer circle I was asked to do about a year ago
  you have  built a prison

the walls made out of love

the bars are made of jealousy

the ceiling made of Rust

All the lies you told me

kept things hidden

and helped to build a prison
 
around my heart

through all those years of silence

you never once talked to me

about anything important

do you know how that feels


All the lies you told me

kept things hidden
 
and helped to build a prison
 
around my heart

in my minds eye I see you

as you used to be

long before all the problems

when you still loved  me

All the lies you told me

kept things hidden

and helped to build a prison
 
around my heart

love can be sad and lonely

and sometimes far too rough

very much like a prison

it can be too much


All the lies you told me

kept things hidden

and helped to build a prison
 
around my heart

Like the guitar sound, and the playing's pretty good.  The harmonies are done well too.
But..........
Not so keen on the vocal style, (my own personal preference) I've never liked the "Dylan" style of singing, which I class this as
Recording's pretty good - shame about the fade out end (also a bug-bear of mine!)