hey,
im new on here but im not new to music.
this is a song i put together, its pretty rough around the edges but im fairly pleased with it

take a listen and give me some feedback

Maslo.

I would thin it out.
I really like the structure and theme.
If you wish to keep all the parts introduce them one at a time. My ear isn't that good.

Nice work on the instruments. That distortion near the end doesn't sound intended. Am I wrong?

Good start.

thanks  do you mean the very end on that quick lcik sorta thing? if you do i just stuck that on the end lol cos it sounded good, how unproffessional!
the ending is abit slapped together really i was gonna extend it but i had to go out lol and so it just ended i was gonna put in another solo or something on top of that guitar rythm at the end but i didnt have time but i may extend it and clean the song up a little sometime

thanks for the comment much appreciated