Hey

And again here is a new demo.. I know.. there are a lot.. it's time that we finish some hehe.

but anyway It's a song I created today, guitar and bass must still be included, but you get a good idea of how it sounds.

All by all it's not totally finished, it is 2:30 long now.

Songtext:

There is no one who can say
That he is without sins
Without lying to himself

Altough our hearts contain good will
We seem out of control
When will this madness finally stop

We all are humans, show humanity
We all need love in this society
We all need trust and reliability
So we can live in full prosperity

We all are sinners
We all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Is it just in our blood?

We all are sinners
we all are haters
We all are bullies
(whisper) Were we created this way?

Razor, finish a song!!!

This is nice and moody, certainly at the start.
The drum rhythm is pretty good, but it sounds a bit clean - perhaps a process it a bit (more)
The piano sound is nice
Keyboard / strings paint a very pleasant background image
Vocals go well with the mood of the music

....... and then it ends!

I like this, but it needs to lead elsewhere.  And of course, it needs to be finished!

Hehe yeah sorry :P we have a lot of unfinished songs.. i just heavy to much ideas etc :p.

what do you mean with "it needs to lead elsewhere" ?

greetz

By the "needs to lead elsewhere" I mean I want the song to progress into something slightly different.  I feel like you build up a feeling of tension, which is great - but then you never release it.   Perhaps make the end quite different - heavy overdriven guitars (or something) - I'm not too sure what at the moment.

But it's a song full of promise!

hehe okay thanx for the critique .

I think that is a good idea, some kind of  heavy climax in it

Nice going Razor, this is exactly what we where talking about the other day.
I really like it.
But too bad again it's not finished.
i really go with Jiminuk
FINISH A SONG!!
I realize its harder then it sounds
and that you guys experiment a lot.

but still...

keep up the good work, I've got full confidence.

Greets Chevalric