Hey Apple, hope there will be someone dancin one my version one day too :p
Tnx for  the listing and the opinion, don't know about a hit, not aiming for that, but I wil be working on this one for shure

Since I got more and more fond of it I felt the need to share the psychedelic creation Kings made of it, and I need to thank him very much, its a rough sketch, but it is promising i think. If he gets to redo it I hope he'll upload it as his version.
http://soundcloud.com/maxdb/oyecomowhiteguy02

And so I got here, quite a remix and 124bpm now(instead of 120):

http://soundcloud.com/maxdb/whiteguy-124bpm-replayed-2

Appreciate any opinion again, all the comments I got really helped me.
I want to change and redo some of the lead guitar parts and the whole crunchy rhythm again, but this is last nights version, no edits, just a mix in.
Having some more ideas, but just want to know what you think..
I think it need some work in the low end on the master bus?

reworked some more, think its even more tight now., how does it sound on your system?

It is still long, left some space for additional solo, added some more keys, redid the clean rhytm guitar with strat with new strings.,
lead rhythm still needs work, will redo that next.

http://soundcloud.com/maxdb/whiteguy-4w

That organ sounds like a circus organ. Funny, but fits in somehow

yeah its nothing like the dirty B3 you were waiting for, but yes it does cheer the song up 
Not sure about bringing it in on the first bars of the intro though...

slight adjustments, dl and check on all sound systems pls? wanna know about lo end(bass heavy?)
http://soundcloud.com/maxdb/whiteguy-4remix

Bass is thumping less out of the mix ... still thumping enough to feel
Vocal sounds a little better ... I think it is a slightly muddy recording anyway.
O! Yea! .... I like the 3 too, lol

Left timed comment
Might come back to it later if I find time ...

I love soundclouds timed comments.

Sounds shit on Soundcloud .... buy the album !