Thanks for the kind words, MaxdB! The timing can be quite tricky indeed. I just found out about homerecording.be. But thanks! You guys are most helpfull!

Nice to stumble on this. There are so many comments that I'm just going to review without reading so apologies if it's already been said. Yep, you're voice needs work... but credit and respect for laying it down with a vox track cos it's something I can't do, and brave if you already know you're not happy with your voice.  I actually envisage a female voice for this to go with the lovely soft tones of the piano. I also think that some of the lyrics don't flow that well or make perfect grammatical sense (not that they really have to, it's better than alot of other songs I've heard). It just seems like it's been translated and might sound better in dutch (I'm assuming cos your flag is netherlands) with a nice husky female voice.

instrumental or not...? Personally, I like the sentiment of the lyrics and as you've taken the time to write them and the music to go with them I think you should try to work on it without just scrapping the lyrics.  The piano playing is top notch btw. lovely listening.

beautiful piano performance,  Kill the vox,  play the vocal melody either as a lead on the piano, or get a violinist to play the melody... I listened to the other link.. while I liked it, the vocal line still doesn't stand up to the piano musically.  Not her voice,, the vocal lines and melody...I hear a more advanced approach with almost an Aria feel to it.

The lyrics and music are quite haunting!  I feel like i'm peeking into personal drama and experience.  It's very moving.