the vocal very nice.....but too louder

background very nice......
second vocal very match.......
good.....i like your style

this is so odd, but i have a song titled china doll as well. but mine is about a young American prostitute... it isn't as vulgar as it may seem. a bit sad. but i love this song, my favorite of yours. i can't offer too much advice or criticism because i don't know a thing about recording devices, instruments, etc... whatever the fuck your equipment is called . but this song is absolutely beautiful. and you show such raw emotion through your voice.

zoe

I like it! very clean voice, excellent harmonies. Mellow, but mysterious. Could you imagine with a band, and a big build at the end! =)

I think your blessed with natural talent. This is a excellent song .I like the way you sing this. Gears nice when you can get it,  but it doesn't help you write anything, that still comes from inside.  Nice job.

I love it!

amateur?  well, I love all your stuff. Great voice, good arrangement, quite promising. Thanks and keep it coming.

this is my favorite bandamp all times track...and i thougd..up up in the forum

nice and melow nice

You have a beautiful voice! like the harmonies!

i hear what you mean about the mic thing. but WOW great song. Thispiece is beautiful. the musical arrangemtns is great. I like complexity of the structture and your vocal melody is really good. Now I'm going to listen to more of your stuff. Really well done!!