Very pretty!

Wow, gorgeous voice. It doesn't sound too amature to me. You've got a real talent for songwriting, even if you're equipment doesn't match your standards.

Likw it, nice vocals, good melody 

nevermind what equipment you´ve used, I think the song is very cool

But everything else is good, really. The background fx are nice;)

to gud to be tru great voice
 

Don't know... you could be something genius... unfortunately modern day popular music biz doesn't want anything authentic or original. I for one am deeply impressed by your sound (eventhough "ammateur"istic produced) and hehe... I've downloaded your songs to my itunes library in my fav. playlist. don't let it go to your head! 

recording with what you had this song is great, i really like it. now can you imagine what it would sound like if you had nicer equipment, this would be killer
don't put yourself down, you rock

I really liked it! but i think you should take some vocal lessons (no offense) but i think you should improve a little your like holding the note (i am taking lessons and my voice improved alot!!!) but i still think that you are really good! keep up the hard work and you can be the next britney spears (only i don't like her) but i mean that you will be very famous some day!~!!    

You got me with this one...I never really expected this from someone here at bandamp...I love your voice...pretty exceptional i must say...
Go hunt for a record Deal...
 

Lovely dear, reminds me of Sixpence None The Richer in a way. I really like the song.

hi,

love this...........................i think it all works..................keep it going

the only crit i have on technical side is............

maybe take a look at quantize on the bass ........ it kind of misses a nadgers nacker when locked up against the sample druns 1:08 ish and 1:50 2:01 etc. this sounds like the start of a midi bass loop?? perhaps you could look at the piano roll of that loop to see that it starts spot on the beat.

also on the same beat you might want to use a pencil tool to tidy up the keyboard part a little................

unless of course it was all live ........in which case i'll just shut up

this is one of your nicest tracks yet............college seems to be working well   the fish

Not really my type of music but it is really really good.....and i don't think the quality is bad at all....the panning is too far to the right though....it might just be me

this is beautiful, i am wackin this on my playlist.

right away it's the vox (i'm always the sucker for a unique female voice) and lyrics that draw me in, you voice is very china-doll-ish on this song. the tracked harmonies are layered very well and during intresting places. you are also a strong lyricist. production is raw but in a good way, although i'm sure the song would benfit from big time production. this is my first porcelain doll experience and i'm looking forward to hearing the rest of your oeuvre!