Good going...

John

I think this song could have alot of different melody's sung over it. I liked it alot

ah k

this would kick ass with some better drums...

it's jammin.

2:27 was a reeeel sweet spot... yeh, kick it...

well, my only critique would be the drums... wayy to repetitive... wayy to repetitive... wayy to repetitive... wayy to repetitive... wayy to repetitive... wayy to repetitive... ok... done now... sorry...

maybe that and the timing being slightly not perfect in some spots..

otherwise, very nice guitarring...