A nice 12 bar blues piece, kinda generic but enjoyed making it .

Nice guitar. It's not a song I like to hear on repeat, but it is nice to listen for once in a while

I WANT MORE!!! keep it up dude. nice guitar sound. what guitar is it? Sounds kinda strat-ish....  AMAZING SHREDDING!! Rock on dude!
Joey.

!! Not bad..........but wut do i kno...........i just started playin guitar:) Keep dooin wut ur dooin

woah thanx dude, its a prs santana se if your interested, its got a beautiful tone which is why i use it, although i dont really do it justice lol

thanks for the constructive criticism *sigh*

I can't say it's a bad song. It might do better with lyrics. I have to agree with you too. It's generic. But what blues tune isn't? If you don't add lyrics, at least add a harp and a Hammond B3. Maybe a slide?

this kind of thing isn't traditionally the kind of thing that i've enjoyed... but i am suprised!  i like this a lot, to be honest.  i actually got excited at the 4 minute mark on the song.  i like the synchapation-ness (excuse me when i make up words ) on the notes.  it makes the lead guitar less predictable.  i know that's a general trait of that style of music, but i think you've done it pretty well

pretty evident rusty doesn't think... i like it

Think maybe rusty should have another look @ his/her music collection if he/she cant hear the blues being played this well...

Alot of parts come through as classic Hendrix lines bieng played much cleaner... I liked it alot...

My only crit might be the way the lead jumps back in there at the 4 min mark after the music faded... Try some kind of decending bass run to lead into it then go straight into it...

Good stuff 

Very nice, man!  A very mellow 12 bar progression.  In my opinion you've carried it out too long, which made me lose interest towards the end.  Good job giving it at least some spark though, like your electric breakdown in the middle and your transition back into a clean lead.  I would suggest some other ways you might add interest could be vocals, changes in tempo, and/or including some 12-bar blues in a different key (like a 3rd, 4rth, or 5th above the key you are playing in).  Nice sound quality!

Oh - you guitarists always like to do these never-ending-jam-sessions.. You need to train your timing to become a good one. Don't loose the touch.

I agree, its nice guitar work. The best part for me was not the tone, but the use of dynamics - really helps the blues to 'sing'

Perhaps a tiny bit long, but we are all guilty of that! Would help to have something recurring as a focal point?

Nice work!

Not bad. Technique-wise, I would recommend spending a little time practicing your bends, to hit them more cleanly - there are a few spots where you sound little sharp or a little flat.

Also, I think this would be better as a shorter piece. It's hard to cut yourself off, but it's important to formalize your work as a complete thought - and not just a meandering observation!

Good luck, keep at it!

i too enjoy the blues and i think you did a pretty good job