Not bad but it gets very boring and "tired" as you go on... try dynamics next time

none too shabby, would like to hear some vocals

nice blues demo   not a song

guitar is good, but i believe a song really needs lyrics. . . or an amazing orchestra, etc.

nice, but i felt no emotion for it.

Bring out my feelings, man!

I like drums.
i like generic sound.
And is is GOOD!

Keep on doing that thing with drums!  

agreed with James on this one. If you were to change the key after that electric guitar break, then it would sound immense. Also, like most people have said, it drags on. Maybe also think about having some variation on those drums. I drum, and if i were playing that same beat over and over again, i would get quite bored. Maybe add some fills in, and at some stages move onto the ride cymbal, would make the piece sound a whole lot better.

I think the guitar work is really good in this song, I like the way the two guitar sounds have been meshed together, but I think i would sound better as a badn piece, with vocals on top of it! The end piece is very santana-esq hehe    I like that!

I play guitar also, and I understand how it is.  Especially if you talk about blues. It's easy to just go on forever.  Your playng is very good and although some think this went on to long, I know you had fun playing it and really, isn't that what its all about. 

Rusty prolly listens to Linkin Park and thinks its music.    'Nuff said. Keep jammin man, that was sw33t!

Pretty good music to just chill out to, you know? And as for what "rusty" said " is this music?" he obviously doesn't know a lot about the subject - keep up the good work.

dude i F#CKIN love this song man. that sound i amazing, i own a prs custom 24 but i haven't quite figured out how to get a sound like that. and i love the drums man. great work!! get some lyrics to go with that, needs some powerful singing. what  kinda amp are you using in this song?

Nice guitar work, although your timing is a tad off here and there (rushing?).  I don't like that loop you use at the beginning, it clicks badly.  But maybe that's just the encoding.

i wanst feelin it sorry man

As a lover of the blues and someone who plays them regularly, I give you mad props. Its got a very good tone and that what blues is. A tone and a feeling, you really do use a generic beat but its very nice. The faster parts are a little off but who am I to talk, I do the same thing sometimes. Just seems like you were getting into a groove and lost sight of what was going on.  Dont take that as bad though. The breakdown is very nice at the 3/4 mark though. I like that very much!!! Keep it up!!!

Good going...

John