Great structure, nice melody, and a very soothing feel (if you don't listen to the words...) made me sleepy at points, in a good way :P NICE!

great song, very chilled beat, brilliant composition.
 no criticisms in the instruments, but you need to give your voice a bit more character. in the words of radiohead:
 "stop wispering, start shouting" or singing, ya know.

thanks

I appreciate that one.

Took me a while, but I think I'm finally starting to come out of my shell in the vocal aspect. Try listening to The Printer if you get a chance. Not one of my best songs I don't think, but I do think there's a bit more life in the vox.

- Ben

Um...WOW!  This is AWESOME!  The mix is damn near perfect to me!  Everything comes through crystal clear!  Whens the cd come out man!  Hi ratings on this little diddy!

Sounds pretty good with feelings of loss. Keys are cool. Great quality recording, good mix! Like to hear abit more deeper lyrics. Still sounds good. Vocals are good. Guitar lead is yes! Keep up the creativity...You've got talent....have a good night!!!....jgv

Amazing.