Simply beautiful, cant say much but i do really like the sound of it keep up the good work dude!!

definatly not your best - but mayby i will have a chance at wining now - LOL

i like it - i th it had a great groove and overall ssound. it was cool to hear you sing - not sure if i have herd you sing before.

the progression isn't like before that i have herd form you, but i love thge lyrics - and dont worry aboaut software sound - i listen for your composition - we all struggle with lack of musicians ( ie drummers, basses ) so don't worry - you made your drums vary and stay simple and the bass could use a little stopn here nad there.

but great soing!!!

yeah, there is just one thing to say, and that's good enough!

its good..i like it great job!

sometimes our best comes at the spur of the moment-this song captured your feelings you wanted to express!!I think this is your best so far (imo), vocally its unique ,musically it reminded me of some early WHO.What i liked most was your vocals-that was the difference for me.Good job,amigo.

solos are a bit loud in the mix, and the vocals could use a little bit more reverb maybe. all in all i think you're on the right track. in terms of writing, i might try to vary the bass up a bit. maybe take it out here and there or change up the rythmn. give the guitar and drums a bit of space to breath. would love to hear what the song would sound like with real drums and bass, but for what it's worth, i enjoyed listening to your song. all the best, mark.

I guess you chose my worst song.
Try with Mental Trap of Falldown!... those have better sound and musical quality.

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overall really good!your vocals started to get really weird right before that guitar solo but i thought it was fine.great song.

Iszil!!!!



    I don't know If I ever told you but I really like this song!

    It is one of my favorites!!!!   One of your BEST!!!!

  

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Pretty good song, I like it.  I'd like to see what you could do with more than a half an our.  Don't care much for the first solo.  Other than that I like it.

Loving the drums in this song! Which program did you use to create them?

A word on the vocals. I think you have potential and your voice reminds me of the singer from Kings of Leon. However as you said the quality in this song is not the best and I think this is as much to do with your inexperience with compression and effects than it is your actual voice! I will say this: your voice sounds much better when you're singing higher notes, so perhaps you could re-record the verses an octave higher or perhaps change the melody altogether to suit your voice better?

I really like the solo. But perhaps you could have a more varied chord progression underneath to spice it up a bit?

I can't get over how good the drums are though. Good work!

This is a pretty nice song, I like the guitar work. Like others have said, it wouldn't hurt to cut one solo out and trim a few things here and there. Also the guitar and drums get off a couple of times, so you might try to keep things tighter in the future.

I'd say your voice is somewhat unique, which is a little strange at first, but very characteristic, which is great if you want to sound original and you want people to recognize your sound right away.

The guitar part does start to get a little repetitive and unnerving towards the end, wouldn't hurt to throw some other chords in there every now and then. I like the faded outro.

I used Guitar Pro 4 to make the drums, but have in mind I MADE the loops MYSELF; there are no pre-done loops.

And yes, I know I should cut some parts because the song is too long, but I won't do it cause this was just a light song I did, and there's no need to work more on it.

I love that you all think my voice is unique.

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