Everybody sing the same old blues
But I don't care I've got nothing to loose
I'm gonna try my luck
And see if you like my song

Every time it's 'bout drugs and booze
The girl you love the girl you loose
I'm gonna change all that
And just try to prove you wrong

I want to sing about the birds and bees
What make me happy what make me please
Don't want to sing about whatever make me cry

When all the songs try to bring you down
They make you cry they mess you around
I'm gonna change all that
And maybe you'll like my song


That as far as I went so far I know it's a bit short

I love it.  In fact, I'd love to record this with your permission.

I would love to hear another take on that song that would be great!
my version is available here
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5540.html

Hilariously I didn't make the connection (I read this before I listened to the song) even though the titles are the same.  I might still take you on that though.

vicent extend the lyrics, it's awesome what you made so far

This is not too short at all. It's a good versatile length. It's a simple piece with a simple message, no need to overdo it. And I like it.