A more "produced" version
I'm not totally happy but that's a step forward for me

poor shaker playing and guitar solo I'm afraid!

The shaker works, but it's not enough---how about a tambourine, bongos, plastic garbage cans (hey, if it's good enough for John Bonham then it's good enough for the rest of us, right?), etc. etc.?

The guitar works for me.  It could be a little cleaner, but I love how deceptively simple it is.  And of course, I think you voice really suits this song.

The guitar solo was a bit of a surprise; I wasn't expecting something so bluesy, but hey, it sounds great.  Very BB King, I liked it.

Good stuff...but you already know how much I love this track.

I really like this song, i'll give a shot and cover it, but just the backtrack without guitar (i don't play guitar), so maybe one you guys record the voice later and guitar over it.

straight away I liked it... hey your voice is really good.x...x..you know how to drop those notes right in..x

Nice song

The melody vox go well with the guitar progression,

How about some vox harmony ah's.

Sounds great as it is though

Denis

Funny, I was sure that I'd posted on this one already!

Anyhow.... it's a great sounding song Vincent.  I like the accented vocal delivery; the guitar playing is pretty good too, it's a simple guitar line that works very well.

Good lyrics, nice construction to the song overall, clean and clear recording.  This one works well for me.

If I were to do anything else I'd add a subtle bass line, some drums, and one extra vocal harmonising on just a couple of lines.

But this is damn good stuff again from you.

I like this nice bluesey sound, reminds me of Married with children the Oasis song.  I think the shaker is nice,  maybe could alternate with some sort of fill at transitional parts of the song.    The solo is perfect and is nice in the mix.  I think the song  might be slightly too long also a nice little outro  with some lead guitar would suit this just like the aforementioned Oasis song.

I agree with the lengh of the song I think I did a verse too many
I don't know the song you're talking about but I might give it a listen
as for the outro that might be a good idea I will look into it
Hopefully I will get my guitarist to put a decent solo on that track( he's so much better than me!)

the song is in the next battle

Voted for!
I hadn't seen this version !!! It's still a really beautiful song, not only is your voice very nice the 'microphone' gives it's own warm effect to the sound !
Guitar solos really cool! Love the sound, comes in a bit sharp on the ear though.
Yea still love your song! 

I like this, I like your song.  Haha, it sounds great.

Voted  and now, commented...  I also nust say the solo, even though your not real happy with it, I think it rocks..

  And I am a huge blues fan.. It is my style...

          Great job...

              JimK

I like the chord progression and lyrics.  I like your voice and lead work.  I can't put my fingure on it but the only thing I would change is the tone of the guitar.  I have to agree with others, it would be nice to hear this with a full band.   I like the idea of closing the song with a guitar lead.   If/when you do version 3.0 please post.

Good song.  Voted.

Matt

I would like to hear a second guitar doing a little jig along with the main guitar. Maybe a bridge with some bluesy... oh wait, I hear it, ok. now its perfect.
5 stars. Good song, no, great song!
Post the lyrics to the song. I love it.