#1May 9th, 2007 · 07:18 AM
110 threads / 55 songs
463 posts
Nepal
out of time
this one started as a instrumental and then Jim did a brilliant impro on it
that gave me ideas and I came out with those lyrics
I hope you don't mind Jim I pinch some of your ideas on that one


When I saw you that day
I knew you were gonna stray
It didn't take long
for things to go wrong
It was just a matter of time

chorus

Oh time
I saw the signs
We're out of time
Out of time


when I saw you that night
I knew something wasn't right
The things that you said
To push me away
It was just a matter of time

chorus

All those things we could have done
All those places we could have gone
I thought with you was where I belong
But nothing I could do was right
now you just want me out of sight
We have fought our final round

chorus
#2August 28th, 2007 · 07:31 AM
110 threads / 55 songs
463 posts
Nepal
while waiting
Until I manage do upload the tracks feel free to comment on the lyrics
Please?
#3August 28th, 2007 · 04:37 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Good lyrics... telling an often repeated story.

Some non-essential grammar changes perhaps for the last verse/bridge but other than that, it's a nicely written piece.

I thought perhaps:

     All the things we could have done
     All the places we could have gone
     I thought with you was where I'd belong
     But nothing that I do is right
     And now you want me out of sight
     We have fought our final round

     Yes time
     I've seen the signs
     We're out of time,
     Out of time

Just my musings...
#4September 12th, 2007 · 06:33 PM
110 threads / 55 songs
463 posts
Nepal
at last!
the song is now on my playlist to listen!
At last
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/5415.html
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