out of time |
this one started as a instrumental and then Jim did a brilliant impro on it
that gave me ideas and I came out with those lyrics
I hope you don't mind Jim I pinch some of your ideas on that one
When I saw you that day
I knew you were gonna stray
It didn't take long
for things to go wrong
It was just a matter of time
chorus
Oh time
I saw the signs
We're out of time
Out of time
when I saw you that night
I knew something wasn't right
The things that you said
To push me away
It was just a matter of time
chorus
All those things we could have done
All those places we could have gone
I thought with you was where I belong
But nothing I could do was right
now you just want me out of sight
We have fought our final round
chorus
that gave me ideas and I came out with those lyrics
I hope you don't mind Jim I pinch some of your ideas on that one
When I saw you that day
I knew you were gonna stray
It didn't take long
for things to go wrong
It was just a matter of time
chorus
Oh time
I saw the signs
We're out of time
Out of time
when I saw you that night
I knew something wasn't right
The things that you said
To push me away
It was just a matter of time
chorus
All those things we could have done
All those places we could have gone
I thought with you was where I belong
But nothing I could do was right
now you just want me out of sight
We have fought our final round
chorus
Good lyrics... telling an often repeated story.
Some non-essential grammar changes perhaps for the last verse/bridge but other than that, it's a nicely written piece.
I thought perhaps:
All the things we could have done
All the places we could have gone
I thought with you was where I'd belong
But nothing that I do is right
And now you want me out of sight
We have fought our final round
Yes time
I've seen the signs
We're out of time,
Out of time
Just my musings...
Some non-essential grammar changes perhaps for the last verse/bridge but other than that, it's a nicely written piece.
I thought perhaps:
All the things we could have done
All the places we could have gone
I thought with you was where I'd belong
But nothing that I do is right
And now you want me out of sight
We have fought our final round
Yes time
I've seen the signs
We're out of time,
Out of time
Just my musings...

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