Here's the lyrics of a new song I haven't had time to record it but will upload it as soon as I do

Many moons ago when I went back to pleasant street
My heart was broken in two and I was staring at defeat
I've been all over the world looking for a girl to make my life complete
But never thought I'd find her down my old street

As soon as I saw her my whole life was turn up side down
I thought it would be different this time around
The heartaches of the past the love that never last
Will soon be forgotten of that I was certain


She's every men's dream she's got it all it seems
Her figure is divine I can't believe she's mine
So please don't let me down don't take your love to town
And stay with me forever let's spend our life together

I was head over hill asked her to move in straight away
Open my door to her my heart was open anyway
threw caution to the wind I couldn't have foreseen
That something wasn't right the future wasn't bright

Our first night together I was in for a big surprise
I thought we would be lovers before the sunrise
When she turned off the lights I just thought she was shy
I never imagined what I left myself in

She's every men's dream she's got it all it seems
Her figure is divine I can't believe she's mine
But she was just a fake and it was my mistake
To think she was a lady but the lady was .......

A man!

I really like this

You did a really good job with keeping the flow the whole time! Digging the lyrics too! It's all so pleasant, and then a big ''bang'' at the end!

really good job!

Ui ui ui! 
Discrepance between a beautiful and perfectly projected surface and the true ,  inner reality.
Hope for you it is a metaphor but not a real experience .     
Seems that nothing is what it seems to be................
  U . L . I .

                         

First recording of that song can be hear there
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/8400.html