| Secret words |
Secret words
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
She spoke to me, as I was open
She spoke to me, as I was alone
She came to me, for I had awoken
Things in her, things that were, as yet unbroken and thus unknown
She smiled at me, as I welcomed her in
She came to me, because she knew I was there
She spoke to me, as she knew I would listen
In view of my position, she knew I would care
Secret words
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of my many ways
She showed what it was she could see
Secret words
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
She spoke to me, as I was open
She spoke to me, as I was alone
She came to me, for I had awoken
Things in her, things that were, as yet unbroken and thus unknown
She smiled at me, as I welcomed her in
She came to me, because she knew I was there
She spoke to me, as she knew I would listen
In view of my position, she knew I would care
Secret words
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of my many ways
She showed what it was she could see
Secret words
Hidden places
Signs and sounds
What runs around comes around
And is still bound I'm sure
Our Magnificence, Our Insignificance
The need we have for love
| Very cool |
For some reason, I am channeling Feist. ^^
I like this. A nice Simple chorus and meaningful verses.
I would suggest minor changes only for the sake of fluidity:
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of my many ways
She showed what it was she could see
to
She spoke to me of freedom
And it's closeness to captivity
I told her of the many ways
She brought me to where I could see
This lyric is cool. It kindof illustrates the balance of ego vs realism and karma. And how close we are to emprisoning ourselves in the pursuit of happiness and love. Perhaps by letting things happen as they may and taking the little moments as they come, we live life instead of pursuing it on that proverbial hamster wheel.
I like this. A nice Simple chorus and meaningful verses.
I would suggest minor changes only for the sake of fluidity:
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of my many ways
She showed what it was she could see
to
She spoke to me of freedom
And it's closeness to captivity
I told her of the many ways
She brought me to where I could see
This lyric is cool. It kindof illustrates the balance of ego vs realism and karma. And how close we are to emprisoning ourselves in the pursuit of happiness and love. Perhaps by letting things happen as they may and taking the little moments as they come, we live life instead of pursuing it on that proverbial hamster wheel.
| re: Very cool |
dustyskates wrote…
For some reason, I am channeling Feist. ^^
I like this. A nice Simple chorus and meaningful verses.
I would suggest minor changes only for the sake of fluidity:
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of my many ways
She showed what it was she could see
to
She spoke to me of freedom
And it's closeness to captivity
I told her of the many ways
She brought me to where I could see
This lyric is cool. It kindof illustrates the balance of ego vs realism and karma. And how close we are to emprisoning ourselves in the pursuit of happiness and love. Perhaps by letting things happen as they may and taking the little moments as they come, we live life instead of pursuing it on that proverbial hamster wheel.
I can appreciate your 'change for fluidity' even though it changes the meaning, it can still fit.
Except....It's not really about me in that 'she didn't bring me to where I could see', what 'I could see' is the lyric it's self.
One small change you make I will take on board, that is the 'the many ways' , that reads properly.
So.....
She spoke to me of freedom
And how close it is to captivity
I told her of the many ways
She showed what it was, that she could see.
Now it's a conversation with / about 'her' again.
Cheers
| re: Very cool |
"It kind of illustrates the balance of ego vs realism and karma. And how close we are to emprisoning ourselves in the pursuit of happiness and love. Perhaps by letting things happen as they may and taking the little moments as they come, we live life instead of pursuing it on that proverbial hamster wheel"
I'm not going to get philosophical with you about it at the moment, my philosophy is the the lyric anyway, but I do really like the way you see it!
One I always carry with me is from the Runes philosophy :
Try to live an ordinary life in an extraordinary way!
I'm not going to get philosophical with you about it at the moment, my philosophy is the the lyric anyway, but I do really like the way you see it!
One I always carry with me is from the Runes philosophy :
Try to live an ordinary life in an extraordinary way!
dude thats nice! and REAL deep man...
thats a cool philosophy to live by but answer me this
can extrodinary being live a life thats is anything less than extrodinary
thats a cool philosophy to live by but answer me this
can extrodinary being live a life thats is anything less than extrodinary
DowntownSasquatch wrote…
can extrodinary being live a life thats is anything less than extrodinary
Has it got something to do with Socialism?
HAHAHAHA ok you go tme there.....
its was right after a chrismas party and let me say....
Egg Nog is ALWAYS spiked.... hahahaha
hahahaha
hey btw... what happened to that? did it get taken off!?!?!?! can you email/pm me what it said?
and one more thing.... could you comment on my song?
http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/16368.html
just lyrics 'cause the studio aint up yet!!
its was right after a chrismas party and let me say....
Egg Nog is ALWAYS spiked.... hahahaha
hahahaha
hey btw... what happened to that? did it get taken off!?!?!?! can you email/pm me what it said?
and one more thing.... could you comment on my song?
http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/16368.html
just lyrics 'cause the studio aint up yet!!
DowntownSasquatch wrote…
HAHAHAHA ok you go tme there.....
its was right after a chrismas party and let me say....
Egg Nog is ALWAYS spiked.... hahahaha
hahahaha
hey btw... what happened to that? did it get taken off!?!?!?! can you email/pm me what it said?
and one more thing.... could you comment on my song?
http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/16368.html
just lyrics 'cause the studio aint up yet!!
:scream:
I just saw a glimpse of a reaction by TK as to 'politics on the amp???' and then later on that day twas not there!
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