The First song from Downtown Sasquatch
collaborated on as a whole... here it is with out further adu

a martyrs prayer

death of a son
in religious text
brings about change
in the opposite sex
death of a martian
on solid ground
kills believers
all around

reject their ideals and philosphies
you know the world was ment for you and me
they just hate us 'cause we're free
this, the martyrs prayer i decree

forget the institution
free your mind
bring about the armys
from behind
take the walls
and burn them down
gather your soldiers
give them crowns

reject their ideals and philosphies
you know the world was ment for you and me
they just hate us 'cause we're free
this, the martyrs prayer i decree

will you die, alive, or alone
let me know where your boundries hold
how far can you go
before the martyrs prayer stands alone

reject their ideals and philosphies
you know the world was ment for you and me
they just hate us 'cause we're free
this, the martyrs prayer i decree

reject their ideals and philosphies
you know the world was ment for you and me
they just hate us 'cause we're free
this, the martyrs prayer i decree

Good! Put your hart and soul into performing it and it could work well.
I dont know about this verse :

will you die, alive, or alone
let me know where your boundries hold
how far can you go
before the martyrs prayer stands alone

It kind of hicups , could be the die/alive and alone/alone and it's got a different time.

All in all it reads well, even if I think the 'meaning' behind some things dont tally with the next.
The chorus is strong and catchy so performed well it could be a power song.
Keep it up.

yea the timing on that verse is wierd 'cause its a break....

and as for the meanings..

Im a very.... out of the box thinker..... and phraser of my words

but they all mean something.. mainly its about my religious veiws and how every one seems

willing to die for there religion (minus the bible belt christians in the usa)

thats another rant for another time baby!!

haha