good composition

liked the vocals a lot! i can see the ben gibbard inflections but i think the vocals are still in your own "voice". liked the up front vocal production and that fret buzz in the first few bars really adds to the organicness of this song. to me, the fade out at around the 2.20 mark seemed a little quick though, was this intentional? seemed like you should of dragged that last note before the fade out another second longer...

Dude! nice song. It's a fine line between contemplative song writer and total wuss... you came out allright here. The vocal fx don't bother me at all but the track is a little spare.. maybe all it needs is another super expressive intrument as counterpoint to your voice, a cello or something. Anyway, I gave you 80

again..i have to reiterate how yr music is much better than what i've heard so far on this site. you have a great voice..totally playable and enjoyable. it's in comparison to the likes of damien rice, iron and wine, colin hay, jude....should i go on...holy cow man..you got the talent..now u just need the connections to cut that first album 

Beautiful song!

Perfect the way it is!

Jp

couldn't agree more. nice work.

I`m more in guitar instrumental songs, and I have lot of songs with lyrics but I never sing them, because I think that my voice are damge the songs, but U have great talent, great voice, this song is great. Great job