I'll try again at this... last time it didn't work... this song's not too catchy, but it's kinda neat i did lots of recording stuff with it so i hope you enjoy.  listen start to finish to get the full affect

so andy, this is a good song.  the lyrics have a serious ben gibbard feel (death cab?), and the harmonies in the second verse are lovely.  good work all around.  it's no "final words", but i love it.

hey how do u wite a song, i am new to this, do u think u could help me, please.

what a compliment.

I MUST put this title on my playlist. It's great. Wonderful voice!

The intro guitar's a little slow, but the lyrics are inspired. The singing is also very good. The multiple voices blend well together also. I was just about to tell you to use some background padding, but then it kicked in, and it's really good sounding. Very nice job. Sounds like something that would be a big hit.

thanks
and to 'hey' i guess you'll have to figure that out on your own...

sounds very good.  keep up the good work glandy.

Enjoyed your entry .  Blessed vocals.......yeah!

loved it, loved it, loved it. The death cab comparison is fair, but you have your own sound, so don't feel like anyone is calling you derivative.

This is my style of music, so I'm probably going to rate this biasedly high, but I guess that's how it goes

The end is a little clunky

Very nice indeed. great vocal harmony!

radiohead to start, a bit generic, the harmonising vocal plugin doesnt work for me(too loud). your voice is amazing, with decent editing this would be fantastic, if not a little samey

Nice work - your vocals sound great and the track is catchy. The recording is of good quality aside from the raspy sounding acoustic and high noise level.

Overall I like the composition, but the best part for me is the vocals and harmonies.

You have a great voice and good power behind it. Love the vocal harmony. I like the lyrics and great song all around.

yeah, the harmony part is slightly too in my face, but i think this is one of my favorites.  so simple and , and, ... i don't have a word for it, but it's great!