i loved it...wish you would turn me on to how you got such a clean, noise free sound.  had me cruisin'

Decent production, instrumentation, and playing. Can't help feeling it is a bit bland though, both compositionally and expressively. Would be nice to have a lot more diversification in the guitar parts.

This sounds like an awesome song, but as a few people recommended, bass is needed to drive the song. With a bit of that. and possibly some vocals, you'd have a real prize here.

Cool. Thats the word for it. I think I concur with Lucky.

that rocked u should make more songs like that!!

that rocked u should make more songs like that!!

Hey. I'm not a connoseiur in music. I used to say I was a singer/songwriter, but I felt I put that name to shame by the limited skillz I've got, but it gets me by... Your song is arranged well, whatever other people might say in terms of what it might lack.  BUt maybe that's what makes your sound yours? !...ANyway, keep it up.

There's no feel to them. The idea of funk is cool, though. I respect where you're going. Come by and check out DPMB.