#1May 11th, 2014 · 04:27 PM
30 threads / 30 songs
91 posts
Germany
Future obsession (demo 2)
In collaboration with: Dino Purić
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Current votes: 1 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2014-06


Unfortunatlly, we weren't able to go to the studio, but we've been rerecording songs for our first demo record, and this is the new version of the song "Future obsession". I hope you'll like it, it was redone I did the production, and played all the instruments, my friend Dino sang the song.

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#2May 14th, 2014 · 04:40 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Australia
not my style but...
drums up. Vocals down... Sounds good, very 'crisp' . Maybe too toppy through my system.
I just can't hear the vocals enough..
Maybe too much compression on everything.
Re-listen and strip it back...
Too loud man, but otherwise, a great idea worth pursuing!
#3May 23rd, 2014 · 02:50 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Very well put together.

Try adjusting the Eq, many of the tracks are similar, thus not creating their own space. I put up a thread about this, but would not know where to find it.  It's a music chart how to pan and eq your tracks by a fantastic teacher Dezz Asante - google him - mixlessons.com is one of his websites. There are many free lectures/videos he has produced - they are advanced and easy to follow.

The vocal effect suites the track, but a bit over kill.

Edit* here is one of the threads
http://www.techmuzeacademy.com/adding-depth-and-distance-to-your-mix/
And another http://forum.bandamp.com/Recording/40345.html
#4May 23rd, 2014 · 03:08 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
Future obsession (demo 2)
WOW ......THIS IS GREAT !!!

The Playing ...vocals....structure all fantastic!!!

Ive given it 94% on the star vote system

Rupes and Denis both hit on the 'mix' side of things and i agree in some of the points they make ...

But Hey .... its a great piece of songwriting .... the rest is production ... which of course is important..

but is it a good song .................. YES  and thank you

if you want my view on production ... well here it comes

you have the trax perfectly made

so what can i add ....

STEREO PICTURE .... PANNING could be a bit more adventurous .... moving the instruments around and maybe moving out of the middle a bit more....specially the rhythm guitar

EQ ..... would like the treble on the guitar solos to rip my head off

vocs a bit more in the face ....drawn to the front

hey ..... thats all a personal taste thing .... what you've done is great!!!!

please do more ....and get your music making friends on the site too so its more exciting!!

flabbergasted fish
#5May 23rd, 2014 · 03:34 PM
30 threads / 30 songs
91 posts
Germany
thanks :)
thank you all for giving it a listen. i'm still learning the production side. and i've used very humble equipment. man lives and learns greetings from Croatia
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