#1April 6th, 2013 · 01:56 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Joker In My Pack
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This song is not in a battle


My band's latest song, I wrote it, sang lead vocals and played bass.

This is our 2nd studio song, have a listen to the first one here: http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/9075.html

Unfortunately this will be our last song together. Me and the lead guitarist decided to leave so the band is no more. We had commitment issues with the drummer and attitude problems with our rhythm guitarist so we think it's for the best. I'm really happy with how my songwriting / vocals / guitar / bass have progressed and I think me and our lead guitarist are a great team. We'll be looking for new members and starting something new.


Verse

Out in the storm I'm feeling the pain
With all of your lies I'm going insane
Can't you see what you do to me?

And when you ask I'll say I'm fine
While you're wasting your breath and I'm wasting mine
Please don't forget me

Chorus

I'm trying to figure out
Quite what you're all about and
I've tried to walk away
But what more can I say to

You who amazed me
Never take you back
Take a look in the mirror and you'll see
I'm the king, you're the joker in my pack

Verse 2

Leaving this town away for the night
And in your defence you knew I was right
So why would you ignore it?

And when your friends come see my show
You be sure to let them know
That I'm the best you've ever had
You'll never get this close to me again

Chorus

I'm trying to figure out
Quite what you're all about and
I've tried to walk away
But what more can I say to

You who amazed me
Never take you back
Take a look in the mirror and you'll see
I'm the king, you're the joker in my pack

Bridge

Cause I don't wanna
Wake up in a bad dream take it all away
Wake up in a strange town
Try to stay awake

Chorus

I'm trying to figure out
Quite what you're all about and
I've tried to walk away
But what more can I say to

You who amazed me
Never take you back
Take a look in the mirror and you'll see
I'm the king, you're the joker in my pack

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#2April 6th, 2013 · 04:29 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,356 posts
United Kingdom
Wow Pete, you have come on in leaps and bounds.
Vox are top notch.
Song is very well structured, performed and produced.
This is ready for Radio.
What a shame the band split-up - hopefully it's for the best
Get the band reformed and get out there - get signed up by a big label and you will be heading for the Stars.
Totally blew me away.
KEEP IT UP
#3April 13th, 2013 · 12:58 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
United States of America
seriously sounds so good, bummer that you guys split 
#4April 18th, 2013 · 03:19 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Pretty energetic, powerful rock-pop .
I hope you both will find new musicians to build up a band and develop your music on the actual state / level.
Good luck, Peter

U.L.I.
#5April 22nd, 2013 · 02:10 PM
29 threads / 23 songs
197 posts
United States of America
I'm really enjoying the track too! Great energy!  I liked the lyrics too Best of luck on your new ventures!
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