Not bad at all.   I agree with above comments about your voice not hitting the notes correctly.

tnx a lot for listening and honest comment Otto !
i agree too 

Ok so it's established that the vocal is not in key.
But the tone and feel of your voice really has a Bon Scott / Lemmy tone.
It could be the effects you use but still it's mostly in your vocal .... get in tune ... or sing where you can and you have a killa voice.

The vocal is totally in key!!!! It's the very right drum which is off frequency. E'thing is fine!