I like this one much more than the soundcloud version.
You strain to hit the high notes in this one too but they sound good.
I did hear a correction wobble in this one but only the second time around
In the other version the pitch correction kicks in a lot and spoils it.... in my humbule opinion

tnx for your opinion man, i am just foolin around with it, i never can be proud of this so i made it clear its a mess up :p also exporing the limits i guess..
i'll be happier when i get a proper solo on it, hope to have time for that next week

Sounds good to me...Agreed ! No pitch correction needs to be mentioned!!!...

well, a week wasn't enough, and still I ain't too happy with it, but ULI's idea of adding a solo part got a form here and I like that.
The solo itself ain't too great, but its pure, no tonal edits :p
Remixed the vox slightly, i hope its better, I never get to like my own voice it seems :p
Redid the additional gtr too, with a fresher sound and tuned strings :p

love to do the vox once again with more power, just cant do that to my 80 years old neighbours,
love to do that solo with more guts and soul, just didnt find the inspiration for it yet.
(lots of PC trouble, and a lung infection due to that)

Well, long story  but thats why i add a soundcloud link for the latest version,
http://soundcloud.com/maxdb/hallelujah-11
íf I ever finish it real good, ill upload it here in a new thread (dont stay up for it)

With regards to ULI.

Mmmmhh, I compared version 11 to v. 7 a few times (especially the solo).
1. Instrumantal mix is clearer
2. Pitch is more audible than in the first version.... Nanu??
3. Fine tone on solo-git, but I liked v.7 better , tonally, melodically.

Oooh yes, the neighbours. Hindering somtimes when one tries to sing or play natural instruments (congas, piano, sax.....).

Whatīs going on with all the ampers here? Everyone īs getting sick somehow.   
Bandamp changes to a sanatorium, he? Or Ziekenhuis. ....
Hope your lungs will get better soon. Donīt smoke that much, Max. Better eat a cake....

Don't stress his pancreas, before he's getting the next symptom (diabetes mellitus)

I do like the cake, you don't have to inhale

tnx for honest opinion ULI, but I am quite sure I will redo it soon with more energy,
oh, and that cake looks yummie !
I gave up most of the smoking since 2 weeks now so dont worry,
also I got myself a Vaporizer, much more efficient, less bad for the lungs

hey man, new to the sight, just checking out some local talent, good job, over all tone is pretty awsome