too bad about the recording equipment... i can relate...

It kind of reminds me of a native american type of tune with the flute thing (not exactly sure what it's called) great job

well i don't care if ur equipment sucks cause i am sure u gotta a talent dude... someday u ll get there... don't u worry... love the flute a lot......................


lovely. try if u can do it again where ur voice is lil more clear. i WANNA Download it still somehow its kindaaaaaaaa soothing to me. I would want to paint while listening to this one of urs...

Keep it up...Kudos! to thy effort..

hi songwriter............

nice song.........its got a structure..............

how can bandampers help u get the best out of your equipment.............the fact that u can get it into mp3 format suggests to me that u r not using your technology resources to their best................

maybe u could tell us all what u r using to record your song and go on from there...........

bandampers can often help with production issues

best to ask a guy like puppetxeno..........or me!!!

look forward to hearing from u

pm me if u like

fishy

im sorry i just cant get into this at all...the whistle is a decent melody but sounds like some sort of children's toy that has seen its better days..maybe got ran over or something....not liking the chorus effects on the voice, way too muddy cant make out a word....decent strumming though and chord progressions, there is definitely artistic merit here, but the effects, mix, and instrumentation havent allowed it to come out in my opinion

doesn't matter if the instrument sux... it's in the talent... and you've got talent.

8/10

yeah, other than the quality, this song is really cool. but i hate to mention that with the quality, 'cause not everyone has an appropiate equipment or mastering skills or such. so, cool song & great lyrics