Raise the vocals, have more "fun" when you're singing.... But
Actually I like this song - weird, and a bit miserable, but strangely compelling.
So answer the question... what does go on in that head?
Enjoyable!

Wow, feels like I just took something illegal, haha.  I like this, it's very experimental sounding.  I like when it gets quiet and then the drums kick in.  This is a melody I had in my mind for hours after listening to it.  Godd stuff.