WTF, this is great, you're well good. I think I'm inlove:-p. This really cool. A bit Avril Laveen (yer yer yer I can't spell, get over it) but it's still very cool.(I secretly love Avril's stuff, it's cool, I don't care).
Damn, beaten at guitar playing by a girl, gutted!

Well Moses, I must agree with you... except the secretly liking Lavigne... I thought Brits were smarter than that

..............nice. nice........ i loved it. the guitars  were great.  It wasn't lacking anything but could definitely benefit from drums and bass.

Hehe Creative Control; try worrying less about being a great singer and thinking more about getting that "angst" and the rumble in your vocal chords.  Rock isn't about having a beautiful voice and perfect pitch; it's about using what you've got, which is less than perfect.
Don't get me wrong, you're voice is great for the style you sing.

Good tune... I thought it was gonna kick in a bit more though at the 1min mark, felt like it built then dropped back down again, came in nice at 2mins, but could still have afforded a bit more of a kick in...

Im not even big into this kind of rock feel, but i was feeling the parts in this tune...

I liked it, liked it alot...

Dave...

Really well thought out tune. Well played and sang by everyone...would like to hear a better production...C

very very good track i really like it, only complaints are, the mic seems distorted, might need to dish out a bit more for a better one and i think the palm muted rhythm guitar needs to be lower in the mix. I dont like the Ryhthm tone either but thats just my opinion.

Apart from this, its an awesome song you are very talented.

i like your song but at the beginning i thought your voice was a bit loud for the song, that got corrected soon enough though! still like it a lot!

I really like this song You have style and it sounds very good.Congratulations for this incredible song.Also I like your voice....really nice.