this is one of my teen angst songs bout not being listened to because of my age. i still dont know what to think of it. . . would love to know ppls opinions

Noice . . .

Really gets going in middle, nice lyrics. Popular topic.

 

A sweet song - started off a bit vague but at 45s+ it really jumps up! I like your voice its definitely got the 'angst' you were aiming for. Production on your vocals hampers it a little but thats only a minor bit of constructive criticism! I like your stuff, this is a cool track, and the lead guitar sounds nice too.

This is OUTSTANDING.  10/10!!!  I love the solo-thingy mabober.  It ROCKS!!! 

wow, hey, i must have missed this one!  i really like that progressing tone, the fullness that it builds into.  defnitely fond of that kick in at the 0:43 mark.

i'm no good with chords, so i can't say "hey, that was a nice progression with the blah and then to the blah blah"

i simply have no knowledge of chords, and i can't seem to learn them, much less pick them out by ear.  but the progressing tone is still great!  that sounds like a ... violin?  that's awesome, whatever it is!

yeah its a violin lol, im really crap on the thing but its a good fun to put simply everything in lol. this used to be my favourite when i was younger. named my first album after it... coz it kinda sums up me alot of the time. . .

Tess you have a great spin on your lyrics I like that. your real ..

i really like it tess.....thats good work...dont stop i think you got it!

Great performance again. As always, love your lyrics and style. I was wondering if you play any instruments. You or your guitarists are rocking. I just noticed their aren't any drums ( I don't think) but it doesn't sound like it is lacking anything in the rhythm area. I think you said something before about there not being any great girl rockers, well you've disproved that, are you the only girl in this band? I personally would love to rock but my voice isn't suited for that genre. Maybe if I stood over the Hudson River and screamed for an hour a day like Pat Benetar, I'd get there, but that seems like such a huge risk. And I certainly don't know any vocal coaches that would teach me how to sing like that. Sorry, to ramble on...

Love the power in this. Like in all your stuff your talent simply bursts out of it. Must be a question of time before someone signs you up.

I should learn to read more before I write. You said '...named my first album...', so I guess you are already signed!

lol no, im not signed. i just make lots of tracks on my pc and shove em on albums to sell to my mates or to people at gigs... plus its a bit unheard of to have a 16 year old signed dont you think? lol

One day you'll re-record this in professional studio and it will be a huge hit!

Seriously: you've got great potential, so keep up the good work.

you're talented. Did you play the leads?

good, better, great, excellent, mad, AWESOME, INSANE

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top stuff, i know your not pro, but i still rated it proffesional... really really good