I decided to check out your stuff when I noticed you are also from RSA, so here I am.

Honest opinion: Not my style of music, in fact I'm not even sure what genre it falls under. BUT... I'd have to say it's very creative, especially bearing in mind that you did this all by yourself which is something I support limitless since I also do my stuff "all me" cos I'm no longer involved in a band. Easy lyrics and not a complex melody (which is in fact usually what makes a breakthrough song). Unfortunately again I listened from only my laptop (not using earphones!  ), so EQ-wise Im unable to really comment now.

Other than that I'd say you definately have talent, cos someone thats not  filled with musician blood can not be as creative as making up an entire song, especially if you did the guitaring yourself by recording.

Furthermore, those who notice my reviews (if anyone), I never intend to write a "book"-length review, but I feel that any musicians' song(s) deserve enough attention cos its hard out there, getting record deals and all.

I'm off....gonna check out your other song.