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#16April 28th, 2006 · 01:17 PM
3 posts
Israel
gettiing better
getting better from song to song
#17May 1st, 2006 · 12:09 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
13 posts
United States of America
Good foundation for a song. The mixing levels should be addressed. The guitar is over-taken by the bass and drums.

I'm sure you're sick of reading this, but vocals would add a ton to the song. Maybe some vocals through a mega-phone? It's too long to not have vocals.

Any way to change the snare sound? The double snare (especially at the end) pops too much.

Other than that it's good. You should be able to develop this into a great one.
#18May 17th, 2006 · 10:31 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
very nice.

man, garageband was so awesome way back when... like... a few weeks ago...

and just so ya know... big fan of those heavily gated drums... I might be the only one...

2:09 is sweet...

very cool
#19July 26th, 2006 · 06:45 PM
11 threads / 9 songs
37 posts
Ireland
Sounds like goldfrapp would be proud of that groove.
Its nice,maybe add a vocal line repaeting or something, even if you cant write a full lyrics set to the song do a "block rockin beats" type repetitive phrase.
It would be cool to have something vocally in there.
Other than that groovy stuff.
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