this is sweet.

puuure sweetness.

someone said the intro is too long... not at all.

excellent job on the vox.

Great melody, motives and harmony! Wow! And your voice is very nice, of course! The motive with "m-m-m-m..." just catches my mind and shakes it! Great, man! Congratulations. Just have to work on the ending. The song finnishes(?) suddenly. This is what I think:)

wow  I saw you online and clicked on your name .. this song came up and wow I'm glad I gave it a listen
very smooth and tasty.. I think everything fits nicely... very catchy and easy to sing along with..
great song
greg