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#1July 17th, 2005 · 03:10 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
Your Cell (Acoustic)
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Score: 83.2%
Rank: 4th
Battle: 2005-08


Acoustic Version of the song "Waiting For Your Cell". If you haven't heard the original version, please do; thanks to the comments, I have made a few changes to the chord progression. Please do let me know if this sounds better, or otherwise. Thanks for listening and be well.
AOB

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#2July 19th, 2005 · 05:05 AM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
awesome job
very good job on the guitar sound.  likes muchly.  i think this version brings out your voice better.  it was still great in the other band version, but this one's going to have a special place in my heart :P  hahaha...

i really like the subtle harmony parts too.  very nice touch
#3July 21st, 2005 · 08:35 AM
42 posts
South Africa
brilliant. if this is your own voice then I think its amazing.
#4July 22nd, 2005 · 04:00 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
90 posts
United Kingdom
don't know what to say really... really, really, really like this !
#5July 23rd, 2005 · 12:42 AM
5 posts
United States of America
I'm impressed by the overall quality, although the audio does seem to crackle a bit in the loudest parts. I think you ought to be able to get a record contract and have a very successful career if you haven't already.
#6July 23rd, 2005 · 09:12 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
12 posts
Canada
Awsome
Amazing song, you have some real talent
#7August 1st, 2005 · 09:18 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
24 posts
Canada
it's good man.  i think there's too much reverb on everything, but that's my opinion.  keep up the good work.
#8August 7th, 2005 · 02:10 PM
3 threads
87 posts
United States of America
Little too bassy- too much sibilence on vocal. Beautiful peice. Wlole thing might be alittle too loud; did you check the overall level?
#9August 7th, 2005 · 11:13 PM
31 threads / 1 songs
434 posts
United States of America
harmonies... yum

there's definitely some clipping going on with these tracks... record with much lower levels and then raise them during mixing and mastering

i don't have a cell phone... so this song doesn't apply to me
#10August 11th, 2005 · 08:42 AM
3 posts
United States of America
Incredible man.  The only thing I have to comment on, is that I think you should've done the solo with an acoustic, I think it would give it more depth.

Otherwise, excellent: You obvious have very good control over your voice which is important, keep up the good work.
#11August 11th, 2005 · 08:59 AM
19 threads / 13 songs
41 posts
Canada
Good
The harmonizing with the vocals is excellent...Long way to go man...
#12August 11th, 2005 · 09:40 AM
11 threads / 11 songs
45 posts
Belgium
Cool
A very good song i like it a lot and impressive vocals, the arrangement is much better than on the electric version .... very good job man !!!
#13August 17th, 2005 · 03:50 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
12 posts
United States of America
Good performance.  Nicely written.

Minor EQ-ing and a stereo effect would increase the vocal presence.  These days, you need to record with lo-res MP3's in mind
#14August 17th, 2005 · 02:04 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
Thanks Y'all!
Thank you all for the great feedback, I knew you guys would like this version better especially since I cleaned up the recording process a whole lot recently. Thanks again and keep the comments coming, it seriously helps me immensely.
Be well
AOB
#15August 24th, 2005 · 10:33 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
10 posts
United States of America
Great
The electric guitar around 1:15 really compliments the acoustic well. Nice song man. Keep it up.
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