So I've got this song, I've lost the recordings, so I guess I'll end up re-recording it sometime.

I've struggled to get lyrics for it before but I'm pretty set on a melody in the chorus and these lyrics:

'It's when all the little things, go away,
It's when all the littles things you do, keep you sane'.

Thought I'd put it up for the sake of it. The guitars may be mixed a bit too low and the bass isn't exactly polished but I like it .

A really nice track, but then you always do come up with some solid stuff every time.
'Sweeping' is the word I'm looking for, I tried a bit of a sing-along and came to a deep, deliberate, near drunken Eddy Vedder type of vocal.
Funny, something like this http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/7681.html  

Yeah a kinda down and out type of vox would go cool, have a beer on me 

It's nice track. Sounds like it'll make a good song when it's all finished. My only comment would be to lay off the cymbals a little bit, it's a bit gaudy hitting it on every downbeat. Hope to hear the finished product.