... hmm, this is actually the first song i've put a considerable amount of work into!
    i usually get bored after an hour but not this time.. ( )
    i've been having some kind of inspiration-flow lately, so I dived into the sea of
    VST Instruments for the first time too.
   
    Anyway, this is how it all ended up, hope u like it


You kept me inside your
cage and I tried to break it
don't know why I'm so scared of you this time

but maybe you and I are so
different but we can't see it
slip through problems 'cause we both want this to work

But I tried to tear my walls down
I don't know why you can't get in
nothing hurts me more than seeing you this sad

and I'm So aware of that I
just ripped your heart out of your chest
I'm spending hours counting beats we could have shared


I know how complete I am with you
and break apart when we're apart
but you deserve more..

and I'm seeing through my need of your love
but no more love means that I'm in control again..


I know that words are not enough
I know My words don't mean a thing
but I've got pictures in my head that speaks a thousand

So I've tried to write them down
to make it up to you somehow
but I know I really can't..


I know how complete I am with you
and break apart when we're apart
but you deserve more..

and I'm seeing through my need of your love
but no more love means that I'm in control again..

Well done for completing the song! Yeah nice vox
I was expecting the song to get more rhythmical and heavy after a minute or so with your vox goining in.
Do you have any Drum & Bass software, Would love you to have a go!!

Thank you Denis!

yes I've got the availability to make some drums but. hmm, Not bass though I guess. I'll check that out.

but I dunno if I'm that keen on makin' it heavier, I'm pretty much bored of this song already, so I think I'll just leave it like this..

another thing is that, I really find making drums extreeeemly lame, that's why the drum-track is so simple in this song :P

but anyway, thx for the comment.

// Adam

I know that words are not enough
I know My words don't mean a thing
but I've got pictures in my head that speaks a thousand


this pulled me in, I can so relate. I agree with dennis, a bass line would send it to a whole new level and somemore light drums in the background. I would enjoy seeing you on stage for an acoustic. Very heartfelt


Aaron DeAger