Im getting a Mazy Star "Fade into you" vibe on this meets Bob Dylan!
Exactly who I was thinkingt about and that song too. My first impression was Tom Petty for vocals, but yah, totally Dylan-esque. I still had to pump up the volume to hear it though.
Get a good recording, and a finished product (or near) and I promise to download it.
Denis wrote…
Lovely relaxed vib. Hmm sort of Floydish. This could be GREAT.
I'm going to try and be constructive here, this is only my opinion:
Change the arrangement, It needs a Kick, Say Drums Bass and Keyboards, with the Vox becoming more aggressive, Then back to acoustic.
Yeah the electronic effects could be used in more places.
Take some Bass off the acoustic to give more Dynamics for Bass guitar & vocals
Or keep it Acoutsic, but shorten the song to about 2.5 mins
Some minor timing issues on the Rhythm guitar.
Cheers
I just wanted to say thank you so much for all of your helpful opinions and critiques, including you Denis. We are in the process of re-recording this song and the quality is WAY better and there are different arangements...and its just awesome. it sounds like a real song. (to me it does....im excited if you havent noticed...lol) it is ALL newly recorded, we didnt keep anything from this version.
after we finish it we'll most likely upload it. thanks again!!!
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