#1March 26th, 2009 · 07:17 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Dont Come Home (New) 2
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This song is not in a battle


A new version of the original "Don't Come Home" which was recorded in August of last year.

Original thread: http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6680.html

Lyrics are in the other thread..


Cheers

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#2March 27th, 2009 · 12:27 PM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,066 posts
Netherlands
Yeah I like this better, with the shorter intro.

Sure production wise there's lots to improve, but I remember how you started once, lol

Yes the song works, structure and lyrics are good, good vocal performance (good instrument performance allround btw), now the next step is getting your arrangements to really sparkle. So far so good don't get me wrong. Keep experimenting
#3March 27th, 2009 · 02:41 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,375 posts
United Kingdom
The Vox are better in this mix, but the music on the first has been mixed better in that the panning is better and sounds more full.

Arrangement as PX said much better.

Keep at it!!

Denis
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