This is a collab with "Fantasy" who wrote the lyrics, I wrote and produced the music.

I recently posted a thread called 'recording vox'  http://forum.bandamp.com/Recording/15420.html
that I'd never tried out until now with this cut, except I did not change the pitch, just used the stereo echo and a little room reverb and boosted the mid range of the lead vox,

Would be interested in your views please

Lyrics:

"Its all nothing but fiction"
is what I hear everyday
so I drift off into my fantasy land
where it only matters what I say
cold are the hearts
that realists of the world contain
If they don't live in Fantasy Land
they are the ones deranged.

I've been living in a Fantasy Land [Chorus]
where every thing's so real.
I'm never coming off this high
I love the way this feels
Here my dreams play out before me
and lovers tell no lies
and the definition of beauty is whats
before your eyes

So here's to all you dreamers
who never learned to stop
who gave love a fighting chance
and learned it cant be bought

who got caught up in a story [bridge]
and lived it everyday
who built your own Fantasy Lands
for your own little escape

Instrumental Solo

chorus

good job.and the song is amazing

Beautiful music ,

Vocals good , but need breathing power in and out , and also some effect , backing vocals needs more clearance and some difference from the main vocal , whether in the octave or in the sharpness,

and regarnding the arrangment of the instruments , have to be divided from riff to riff till chorus where everything or the most plays in, i have to feel difference from the start to the mid till the chorus till the solo part if there's any

I give it 3 from 5

Cheers
MyzzyM
https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido

Nice cut Denis..Your voice sound good in the mix...Very well put together....I did feel there was a bit of clipping in there at about 1 24....Not sure if I agree with Myz ideas..I think this piece is kinda fluid and dreamy to many changes might kill the looseness on the feel....Anyways thats my view...

Great Collab guys!

Nice clean production.  The stereo imaging is good, nice impression of space.  The vocal approach, to me, has a pro and a con, the good being so nice and clean.   The down side, which is more of just my taste, is that they're a bit dry.  Cool song, different kind of a vibe - it speaks of songwriting that's not afraid to just put it out there and not hide behind flashy production trickery.

sounds like an old pink floyd song mixed with some pop music but its not bad.
good to see your goin somewhere sarah. good luck

Good hook. Vocs could use some power and are a bit pitchy. Cool song though!
2 thums up!